Hai-Kuul – July 07, 2005

It’s great when I get a new requestor that is much more gifted at writing these than I am. Thanks for the submission, James! You are the first entry. Let the fun begin…

Doomed Love On a Timer (Requested by Enraptured4)
Why must you leave me?
It feels like it just began
Time is running out

Keith Richards (Requested by Ian)
Age personified
This rocker was a model
For Captain Sparrow

Fresca (Requested by Ian)
Very refreshing
Like a lemon waterfall
Cascading inwards

Body Suits (Requested by Ian)
These odd devices
Help superheroes exist
Good or bad? Who knows?

International Intrigue (Requested by Ian)
To survive this world
Employ charm and stealth with flair
You could go quite far

Bossa Nova (Requested by Ian)
It touches your soul
They rhythm like a lover
Primally refined

Vodka Sauce (Requested by Ian)
Dancing With the Stars

Takes a toll on Ian’s brain
He has lost his mind


Socks and Sandals (Requested by Courtney8292)
I’ve seen this before
Fashion travesty but that’s
Just my opinion

Bug Flew Up My Nose (Requested by Courtney8292)
It came from nowhere
And found a home in my nose
What a gross feeling

T-Shirt Tan (Requested by Courtney8292)
Spending time outside
Entails many risks. None as
Funny as this, though

The Ocean (Requested by ScubaDiana)
It moves with the Earth
And holds life beyond measure
We’ve so much to find

Scuba Diving (Requested by ScubaDiana)
It’s the best method
Of becoming one with our
Bountiful oceans

*Remember, you can submit a topic to inspire your very own Haiku Poem by clicking here. You can read about Hai-Kuul here.

4 Responses

  1. Thanks for the comment… 🙂 You’re right of course. I already feel better for having vented a little… And good work on the haiku! I like it. Hah! gifted writer… i like that! as for MORE gifted… not so sure about that! 🙂 but thank you, nonetheless! I think I may pop down to see your work! I find myself wandering around Queen St. fairly often… why not spend some of that time in a worthwhile pursuit? ha ha. Catch you around! James.

  2. LOL, leave it to Ian to make us all say “why didn’t I think of that?” he he…Keith Richards, ha ha ha!!

  3. Thanks for poppin in Jorge…..and thanks for completing this….very kewl… Cheers… Diana

  4. Keith Richards totally needed to be Hai-kuuled. Now he can go pass out in a gutter somewhere in live in peace! Thanks Hai-kuul master! ~ian

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