Hai-Kuul – July 22, 2005

Don’t Know How to Party (Requested by The Shellie)
What am I doing?
I am agoraphobic!
I can’t even dance!


Jimmy Crack Corn and I Don’t Care or Do I? (Requested by The Shellie)
My master is dead
I’m not even in his will
Stupid Blue-Tailed fly


Anything Tastes Good Fried (Requested by The Shellie)
Coat it in batter
And it will taste like butter
Great, greasy goodness!


Wedding Crashers (Requested by The Shellie)
Who the hell are you?
Where’s your invitation, punk?
Or at least, a gift!


Thunderstorm On the Lake (Requested by Cat)
Rolling thunder and
Twice as much lightning as it
Reflects in the lake


Kids Feeding Ducks (Requested by Cat)
They feel so useful
Throwing breadcrumbs on the ground
To watch the results


Diving Into Deep Water (Requested by Cat)
Water rushes past
As your surroundings darken
You dive to the depths!


Cannonballs (Requested by Cat)
Leaping. Hurtling
Curled into a tight, round ball
To make a big splash




*Remember, you can submit a topic to inspire your very own Haiku Poem by clicking here. You can read about Hai-Kuul here.

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5 Responses

  1. Via Halifax as well…. Nice to see your creativity is being noted. Your site oozes with it, as well as wit and compassion. Along the lines of keeping Superman human and realistic too is the believability and realism in aptly placed profanity. Shouldn’t be long. 😉 Salut! C

  2. The old Black rum gots a hold on me… or Guinness maybe,… my 3rd and final drunky comment of the night. I’ll have mercy on others…. Jorge.will feel my drunken wrath… Mwwwahhhaha… A night of Newfie music and many pints, mixed in with the Latin influence of the Colombian super-estrella…. Believe you me,, even the zen master Jorge would be feelin’ it, with that combo… Long may your big jib draw…. Have fun web pagin’…. Final toast before I pass outt…… and done… ~ian….

  3. You are the master, Jorge. And, you are the only reason I still remember my MSN password (damn you, I have to sign in every single time!). Also, you sure did vomit out a lot of words about le superman down below, didn’t you? I am really not a comic books girl, nor should I ever even speak of animation in general ever again, after having admitted once to having a crush on the red headed boy from Captain Planet.

  4. Well Jorge, I decided to give you a break from Hai-Kuul’s…until tomorrow that is. I’d write a longer comment but I’m actually at the office right now and working my arse off at 5:30 in the morning. Sigh… Hope that you had a good weekend. Cheers, Drea

  5. Thanks for the poems…requested from the cottage. They’re great. Problem with being away for a week…I’ve got a lot of catching up to do! You’ve been writing a lot…. 🙂

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