Hai-Kuul – June 06, 2005

In the course of interpreting requests, I do tend to take a little bit of creative license with some of what I receive. Some of these might be spelling mistakes, for example, that I will correct if I feel that it is the intention of the requestor. Sometimes I leave them, as they make a more interesting poem.


U Got it All Wrong (Requested by princess_castle)
What do you mean five?
I gave you twenty. You must
Give me ten for change!

I Am Not a Pre-Hitoric Creature (Requested by princess_castle)
I’m not one of those
It’s not even a real word
You just made that up

Three Black Cats and Rain (Requested by ksgrrl)
Three poor, soaked felines
Trapped in the deluge outside
At least they’re now clean

Horse Rides On the Beach (Requested by WizenedDragonPK)
Sweet, relaxed freedom
It’s a joy to be leaving
Hoofprints in the sand

*Remember, you can submit a topic to inspire your very own Haiku Poem by clicking here. You can read about Hai-Kuul here.

3 Responses

  1. Good Monday to you! Just thought would stop in and say helllooooo!!! 😀 HI! Linette

  2. You are so Hai-kuul. That’s 5 syllables. Hmm. Methinks I have the beginnings of a ‘tanka’ here. Love & Light Jorge MM

  3. whoohoo! I love my hai-kuul and so do my newly clean kitties. Thanks!

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