Hai-Kuul – April 20, 2005

Blogo (Requested by mapleleafkideh)
There is a strange game
Played by MSN Bloggers
I don’t quite get it

Obsession (Requested by bbyGrrl)
A dangerous thing
Wanting something so badly
It’s beyond reason

Stalking (Requested by bbyGrrl)
Following Someone
Changing celery’s structure
Climbing to giants

Wanting (Requested by bbyGrrl)
See that object there?
I must have it for myself
I’ll pay any price

Wishing (Requested by bbyGrrl)
Wishing upon stars
Doesn’t really do that much
For a bad headache

Overweight Antelopes (Requested by Jay)
Lounging in the grass
Chewing on Vegetation
Not giving a damn

Pineapple Tidbits (Requested by Jay)
Handy for cooking
These beauties come in syrup
Not quite natural

The Number Nine (Requested by Jay)
Nestled betwixt eight
And ten. Stealing the spotlight
Nine is a damned tart

Inverted Eyelashes That Poke You In the Cornea (Requested by Jay)
Just walking along
Suddenly a flash of pain
Stupid Eyelashes!

*Remember, you can submit a topic to inspire your very own Haiku Poem by clicking here. You can read about Hai-Kuul here.

5 Responses

  1. Jorge you are super-fly.
    Love the stalking one! I hope Mrs. J has it framed, such genius should at least go up on the fridge.

  2. Wow, some of your Hai-kul was deep today. Or maybe I am just fatigued.

  3. Wow!
    A genius comment from Jay!

    I will sleep happily tonight and dream the dreams of those who are not the damned.

    (Seriously, thanks!)

  4. Jorge will you pllllllllllllease write me a hai-kuul about teaching?

  5. OMG, Jorge!

    I loved them all but I totally feel the OBSESSION one! Thank you, awesome job!!!

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