Hai-Kuul – January 23, 2006

Posted on January 23, 2006 by Jorge

I Know U Like to Know (Requested by princess_castle)
What’s my life to you?
You walk too close and hear lots
Mind your own beeswax!

Burn In Hell (Requested by princess_castle)
You hide a secret
Only your conscience knows it
For this you will fry


Settled (Requested by princess_castle)
To be nomadic
Is not always the best way
Find tranquility


Is it Yes or Sorry? (Requested by princess_castle)
I asked a question
About what you did last night
Either choice will suck


Home (Requested by princess_castle)
A place to relax
Where four walls mean more than safe
A place where love is


Cramming (Requested by princess_castle)
Compressing knowledge
The attempt to absorb all
So that I might pass


I Never Loved U Anyway (Requested by princess_castle)
Stop your snide smirking
Do you think you have hurt me?
No skin off my back


Critique of a Play (Requested by princess_castle)
The curtain has closed
I’m now in the dark with thoughts
Swimming in my head


No What-If’s, Please (Requested by princess_castle)
Don’t waste this moment
Inventing scenarios
Let’s just enjoy this




*Remember, you can submit a topic to inspire your very own Haiku Poem by clicking here. You can read about Hai-Kuul here.

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8 Responses

  1. The_Scottish_Vixen95, on February 5, 2007 at 12:55 pm said:

    You should make one called The Enchanter:P LOL you rock ~Leah~

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  2. AgeyD, on February 5, 2007 at 12:55 pm said:

    Hi Jorges, Your Hai-kuuls are awesome. It always fun to read the topics given and how you manipulate such a large amount of information in three verses. You are the Hai-Kuul King!! LOL!! Keep it up! Here’s my topic: blogger blues. I’m feeling that way right now. Anyway, please take care and keep Hai-Kuuling!! Adrienne

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  3. St-Martini-of-the-Vodka, on February 5, 2007 at 12:55 pm said:

    Hi Jorge. What’s up? Did you have a good weekend? Or should I say did U have a good weekend? When did U make that crossover anyway?

    Reply
  5. Jorge, on February 5, 2007 at 12:57 pm said:

    I creat haiku based on what I am sent, Jay. So there.

    Jorge: Point
    Jay: P0wned!

    Reply
  6. anurs2, on February 5, 2007 at 12:58 pm said:

    Amazing Hai–Kuul as usual! You’re the best!! :.D Tisha

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  7. Courtney-O, on February 5, 2007 at 12:59 pm said:

    My two favorites – ‘Burn in Hell’ and ‘Is It Yes or Sorry?’ Good ones, Jorge. By the way, if I lived in Canada, I would TOTALLY join the Keg Party. Just so you know. (I think we can also count on the college-frat-boy vote.) 😉

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  8. princess_castle, on February 5, 2007 at 12:59 pm said:

    hey J

    how u doin?

    wow…these haikuls are just awesome…wll.my fav would be I KNOW U LIKE TO KNOW..haha..mind ur own beeswax! haha

    hope all is well with u..

    Reply

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