Hai-Kuul – February 22, 2006

This one needed two interpretations…


My Kingdom For a Package (Requested by jules)
I bide my sweet time
Doing a great job until
They say it’s my time


My Kingdom For a Package (Requested by jules)
My body feels wrong
I am a woman and yet
I need to be male





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4 Responses

  1. Hi Jorge,

    I like the second one more. LOL! Perhaps it’s the interpretation of what the package is 😛

    Otherwise, I’m online!! I think I’ll start chatting with you there!

    Bye!!

    Adrienne

  2. sweet mary!!!!!
    ok – that is hilarious!!! I’m glad you bided your time to come up with 2 very perfect Haikus!!!!

    Thank you for making me laugh out loud on a wednesday night.

  3. Very Kuul 😉
    btw.. love the honesty re:your comment at my space;)
    I am just a space pimper by nature lol..i linked ya anyway
    You definately got a space loaded with interesting reads!

    Just doin my pre-weekend rounds…so
    hope you have a wonderful love and lust
    filled weekend!! Keep an eye out for “question of the day”
    over at my space, and if you have ANY questionsof ANY kind
    Im all ears;) Just click on the link up top of the page titled ஐŧk Åphrøðítêஐ!!
    (¯`v´¯)
    `•.¸.•´ ¸
    ஐÅphrøðítêஐ
    •´¸.•´¨) ¸.•*¨)
    (¸.•´ (¸.•´ .•´¸¸.•´ ஐhelping people with affairs of the heartஐ

  4. ok–I’m embarassed to say that it took me awhile to figure out the first one. I kept thinking “that doesn’t sound anything like hanging around waiting for the UPS guy…”

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